Decisions and a long post – everyone read it!

Ok guys, as I said, we've made some decisions. I'll just sort them by the poems. Everybody who has been chosen now: Please send your illustrations to: dozi@nikolaushaus.de, and please remember the guidelines Felix gave you at the beginning of the course! I'll write a more general post in a moment, this one is just about decisions!

- „In grey“

Anna Sh
We'll take your illustration, its great and will be a very good addition to the entire composition of the magazine. We'll have to talk about the layouting but Dozi can do that with you. talk to Dozi about the Layouting

Oren: We like the style of your figure very much. Why not keep the figure and try something for one of the new texts?


„Accessory“:
Miryam and Itai we like, but I'm afraid it just won't do. We need new illustrations for this poem. It is one of the most difficult ones, I know. But honestly: All of you can do a lot more for this poem! I wrote it before, but the balance betwenn poem and illustration has to be as close to equal as we can get. This poem is a real challenge and an opportunity for anyone who can tackle it!

„Finally“:
Lena again. I'm almost a little reluctant to say it, but the illustration is simply the best one. And here of course we're in a bit of a bog, because we didn't want to use two illustrations from one of you but more about that later. So: Lena, please send your illustration to Dozi!


„On foot“:
We would like to take Sofia's illustration for this poem. But: Please send us a scan of the whole page, and could you maybe write a translation of „on foot“ (just the title, not the whole poem of course!) below the illustration? We like the style of your work, and it is also a decision for diversity, so please send the illustration to Dozi.

So far so good. Just a few remarks for those who submitted more posts:

gidi: We really like the way you're working for the blogg. Keep it up! We would like to use Felix' „portrait“ for an afterword in the magazine, maybe you can do more of these illustrations when we are in Jerusalem? And: We really want to use some of your work but we keep finding details that don't want to fit – just keep it up and maybe try to be a little less shy with your work!

oree
We really like the picture you posted and could definitely use it for something in the magazine, but you have to get rid of that photo!

Dalit,
I spoke to Felix again about your picture. I've seen that you've posted a new version, but I would like to ask you to try the following: Why not draw the soldier linear and colour the wall? We won't use it for „in grey“ but we'll use it for something else!

Thanks to everybody for their work so far. New texts have been uploaded, and we really need good results soon, so keep on drawing!